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SE :: Your next ... by Cyril-Sneer SE :: Your next ... by Cyril-Sneer
... appointment at the dentist's will be now!!!


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photographer: Sayuri_Tanaka [link]
Maka Albarn: ~AleaRose24
Soul & editing: me
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So pretty damn epic, so since you asked for a critique there really isnt anything that i could find wrong with it.

The first thing i can point out is that well it dosnt look like there is motion, maka cosplayer dosnt look as if she is hitting him when it comes to her pose. But after all this is a static image so it would be hard to do so.

The expression of maka dosnt seem that angry (if she is trying to be anyway :3)

last thing is that the screen text dosnt look that good, maybe try making it more solid i dunno.

well this is just some little things i picked up on other then that it really does look awesome :3

<3 souleater
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Initially, I'd like to say that this beautiful rendition is finely average. The method you have implemented is absolutely mind-blowing. It is understandable to me that you worked hard on this with your faultless scope of techniques. The contrast of this art piece is obviously suitable for the metaphor that I see you are trying to achieve, but however, in saying that this statement is likely unnecessary. Despite that, I sense that your use of colour could of been improved upon as I think that it doesn't duplicate the brilliance found in the rest of the piece. In conclusion I would like to illuminate that it has been a joy to pen this comment for you and I feel it will allow you to maximize the potential of your creation.
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:icondeathspell1995:
How did you have the teeth like you did?
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:iconcyril-sneer:
Bought them at dental distortions.
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:iconrominaisawesome:
Rominaisawesome Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lmao :D
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:iconsasu-chanxnaru-chan:
Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
How do you even teeth.....share with me your secrets
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:iconcyril-sneer:
Haha, you have to ask my mother ;P
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Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
>:U i would if she had a DA -dies
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:iconcyril-sneer:
Haha, I made a joke^^

I bought them on dentaldistortions.com ;)
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Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
ahhh lol <_> thank you :3
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SorenFreyDust May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gott is das geil *_* mit welchem Programm bearbeitest du das?
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